Change

2016-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

What is change? What is there anything that does not change the world? No, is there anything that does not change the world? Physicist talked about the concept of time. The past has gone and no, the future is not yet, the present is no because of not exist. Every moment is the past. Now is conceptually only exist. World is always change. The problem is the direction of change. Positive thought and action bring to development and happiness, satisfaction, better life, success. But negative behavior brings to him unhappy. Furthermore, it called out the ruin. Finally positive thought is the power to change himself and the world. I should change first, the world changes. Gandhi said that you must be the change you wish to see in the world. I agree entirely.

강사 첨삭

Hi there sir,

We should change first before we can expect to see change in the world. But you know sir, the first step is the hardest to take. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. As usual, you did great in your homework. You are a superb writer! See you tomorrow sir!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

What is change?

>> correct!

What is there anything that does not change the world?

>> Is there anything that does not change in the world?

No, is there anything that does not change the world?

>> correct!

Physicist talked about the concept of time.

>> correct!

The past has gone and no, the future is not yet, the present is no because of not exist.

>> I think this quote is from Mother Teresa. She said,  \"Yesterday is gone. Tomorrow has not yet come. We have only today. Let us begin.\"

Every moment is the past.

>> correct!

Now is conceptually only exist.

>> Now is the only one that exist.

World is always change.

>> The world is always changing.

The problem is the direction of change.

>> correct!

Positive thought and action bring to development and happiness, satisfaction, better life, and success.

>> correct!

But negative behavior brings to him unhappy.

>> But negative behavior brings unhappiness.

Furthermore, it called out the ruin.

>> Furthermore, it calls out ruin.

Finally positive thought is the power to change himself and the world.

>> correct!

I should change first, the world changes.

>> I should change first then the world will change.

Gandhi said that you must be the change you wish to see in the world.

>> correct!

I agree entirely.

>> correct!

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