change
학생이 쓴 원문
I wanner have an activity character
my inactivity character made me timid there were a lot of things to do
but it is made me hesitated
강사 첨삭
Thank you so much, Mrs. [Name] for doing your homework today.
Aja aja! You can do it.
You can overcome being shy.
I was shy before as well, but my father is highly encouraging me to face my fears.
God bless!
~Teacher Eve,
I wanner have an activity character
>> I wanted to have an active character.
my inactivity character made me timid there were a lot of things to do
>> My inactive characteristic is making me timid when there\'s a lot of things to do.
but it is made me hesitated
>> And it is also making me hesitate.
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