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2020-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

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I wanner have an activity character my inactivity character made me timid there were a lot of things to do but it is made me hesitated

강사 첨삭

Thank you so much, Mrs. [Name] for doing your homework today.

Aja aja! You can do it.

You can overcome being shy.

I was shy before as well, but my father is highly encouraging me to face my fears.

God bless!

~Teacher Eve,

I wanner have an activity character 

>> I wanted to have an active character.
 my inactivity character made me timid there were a lot of things to do 

>> My inactive characteristic is making me timid when there\'s a lot of things to do.
 but it is made me hesitated

>> And it is also making me hesitate.

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