Change in transportation
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Hey Jay,
Well, I guess the car that your team designed could be seen on the road in the future. That would be amazing.(\",)
~Lynn
These days, there are so many cars in the road and we always have experienced traffic jams while we are commuting.
>> These days, there are so many cars on the road and we always experience traffic jams while we are commuting.
I think the method of transportation should change.
>> correct!
Everything has became more convenient and also people have got accustomed to being convenient and fast.
>> Everything became more convenient and people have gotten accustomed to it.
I learned the future transportation in the class and I performed a project designing it at 2014.
>> I learned about the future transportation in class and I made a project designing it in 2014.
Our team designed the personal vehicle and got a first place in this class but there were many good ideas for the future transportation.
>> Our team designed the personal vehicle and it got first place in this class but there were many other good ideas for the future transportation from they other groups/teams.
One thing is about the bus.
>> correct!
That team designed the exterior of the bus like a bridge, so it has a big space under the bottom.
>> That team designed the exterior of the bus like a bridge, so it has a big space at the bottom.
It means other cars could pass through the below space of the bus and they said it would relieve the traffic jam
>> It means other cars could pass through the space below the bus and they said it would relieve the traffic jam.
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