Change is important.

2020-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

학생이 쓴 원문

There’s going to be a change in the weather. Lane Change Assist improves the safety of motorways. I played in my room after arrving from my relative\'s house. I am playing PC at PC palyground. I will playing for four day without rest. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]t [이름]. Thank you for your effort in doing your homework. Keep up the good work!^^

There’s going to be a change in the weather.
>>>CORRECT!
Lane Change Assist improves the safety of motorways.
>>> Lane Change Assistance improves the safety of motorways.
I played in my room after arrving from my relative\'s house.
>>> I stayed in my room after arriving from my relative\'s house.
I am playing PC at PC palyground.
>>> I am playing computer at a PC playground.
I will playing for four day without rest.
>>> I will be playing for four days without rest.
OR >>>I will play for four days without rest.

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