Change My Appearance
학생이 쓴 원문
If I change my appearance, I would like to look like Jang Wonyoung.
She is an idol, and she is a member of \'Ive\'.
Most people know her and the group.
Also, many people know that she is very pretty and cute idol.
She is tall, has a sharp nose, pretty eyes and good at study.
Thus, I would like to look like Jang Wonyoung to have a good appearance.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your composition.
I think it would be really good practice for you.
Let\'s continue having fun in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
If I change my appearance, I would like to look like Jang Wonyoung.
>> Correct
She is an idol, and she is a member of \'Ive\'.
She is an idol, and she is a member of \'Ive\'.
>> Correct
Most people know her and the group.
Most people know her and the group.
>> Correct
Also, many people know that she is very pretty and cute idol.
Also, many people know that she is very pretty and cute idol.
>> Also, many people know that she is a very pretty and cute idol.
She is tall, has a sharp nose, pretty eyes and good at study.
She is tall, has a sharp nose, pretty eyes and good at study.
>> She is tall, has a sharp nose, has pretty eyes and good at studying.
Thus, I would like to look like Jang Wonyoung to have a good appearance.
Thus, I would like to look like Jang Wonyoung to have a good appearance.
>> Correct
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