Change phone
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Whether to change my phone depends on my will or budget. Some users change their phones every two or three years because they feel inconvenient for their phone\'s poor working. However, my family doesn\'t change our phones until they are broken. As for my husband, he has used his current phone for over 4 years. My eldest daughter rarely change her phone even if it\'s old fashioned and works slightly slow. Because of quick service, using old phones is possible and isn\'t inconvenient.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I am the same as your family. Nowadays, I will only change my phone when it’s not working properly or if it causes inconvenience to me. However, when I was young, I used to change my phone quite often because having a new phone felt trendy. I felt up to date with gadgets, and it also felt nice to be praised for it by colleagues and friends. But as we get older, I think we become more practical and better at prioritizing wants and needs.
- T. Caitlyn
Whether to change my phone depends on my will or budget.
>> Whether I change my phone depends on my will or budget.
Some users change their phones every two or three years because they feel inconvenient for their phone\'s poor working.
>> Some users change their phones every two or three years because they feel inconvenienced by their phone’s poor performance.
However, my family doesn\'t change our phones until they are broken.
>> CORRECT
As for my husband, he has used his current phone for over 4 years.
>> CORRECT
My eldest daughter rarely change her phone even if it\'s old fashioned and works slightly slow.
>> My eldest daughter rarely changes her phone, even if it’s old-fashioned and is a bit slow.
Because of quick service, using old phones is possible and isn\'t inconvenient.
>> CORRECT
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