Change speedily
학생이 쓴 원문
In these days, I feel various things change very fast.
For example, some techniques, popular fashions, make-up and so on are instantly change.
Internet speed will be having faster than now and abroad travel will be more simple process.
I think future world is more comfortable for us from the side of our daily routine.
So, I hope to be become a little bit slowly to change world.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jady!
You got the point perfectly.
I always appreciate your efforts.
Great job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
In these days, I feel various things change very fast.
>> These days, I feel various things change very fast.
For example, some techniques, popular fashions, make-up and so on are instantly change.
For example, some techniques, popular fashions, make-up and so on are instantly change.
>> For example, techniques, popular fashion, make-up, and so on change instantly.
Internet speed will be having faster than now and abroad travel will be more simple process.
Internet speed will be having faster than now and abroad travel will be more simple process.
>> Internet speed will become faster, and traveling abroad will be a simpler process.
I think future world is more comfortable for us from the side of our daily routine.
I think future world is more comfortable for us from the side of our daily routine.
>> I think the future world will be more comfortable for us in terms of our daily routine.
So, I hope to be become a little bit slowly to change world.
So, I hope to be become a little bit slowly to change world.
>> Still, I hope the world will slow down a little in how fast it changes.
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