Changed thing because of the virus

2020-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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It has been almost 2 months since pandemic. Thing have been changed a lot. Also it has affected my life. Fortunately not many things in my life are changed. There was no official lockdown in my city, just the government warned us not to go people gathering places. That is actually the major change. I enjoyed going to the park and taking a walk, but because of this contagious virus, i cannot do that anymore. So i just hope medical corporations to develop the vaccines.

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Hi [이름],

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Have a warm and safe Tuesday!

Teacher Elly.

Changed thing because of the virus

>>Things have changed because of the virus.

It has been almost 2 months since pandemic.

>>It has been almost 2 months since the pandemic.

Thing have been changed a lot.

>>Things have changed a lot.

Also, it has affected my life.

CORRECT!

or>>It has also affected me and my daily life.

Fortunately not many things in my life are changed.

>>Fortunately, there aren’t many things in my life that have been changed.

There was no official lockdown in my city, just the government warned us not to go people gathering places.

>>There was no official lockdown in my city, the government just warned us not to go to gatherings with so many people.

That is actually the major change.

CORRECT!

or>>This is actually the significant change.

I enjoyed going to the park and taking a walk, but because of this contagious virus, i cannot do that anymore.

>>I enjoyed going to the park for a walk, but because of this contagious virus, I cannot do that anymore.

So i just hope medical corporations to develop the vaccines.

>>So, I just hope that the medical corporations will be able to develop a vaccine.

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