Changed thing because of the virus
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Changed thing because of the virus
>>Things have changed because of the virus.
It has been almost 2 months since pandemic.
>>It has been almost 2 months since the pandemic.
Thing have been changed a lot.
>>Things have changed a lot.
Also, it has affected my life.
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or>>It has also affected me and my daily life.
Fortunately not many things in my life are changed.
>>Fortunately, there aren’t many things in my life that have been changed.
There was no official lockdown in my city, just the government warned us not to go people gathering places.
>>There was no official lockdown in my city, the government just warned us not to go to gatherings with so many people.
That is actually the major change.
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or>>This is actually the significant change.
I enjoyed going to the park and taking a walk, but because of this contagious virus, i cannot do that anymore.
>>I enjoyed going to the park for a walk, but because of this contagious virus, I cannot do that anymore.
So i just hope medical corporations to develop the vaccines.
>>So, I just hope that the medical corporations will be able to develop a vaccine.
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