Changing bad habbit

2011-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

Changing habit is a difficult problem wether it is good or bad. If someone wants to change habbit, he must not do the particular behavior. Untile that behavior is gone. He must do another behavior which is opposite from the behvior that he wants to get rid of.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], A habit is something you can do without thinking - which is why most of us have so many of them.  Bad habits are easier to abandon today than tomorrow.  Good job in doing your composition. -Teacher May -   Changing habit is a difficult problem wether it is good or bad. >> Changing a habit is a difficult problem weather it is good or bad.If someone wants to change habbit, he must not do the particular behavior. Untile that behavior is gone. >> If someone wants to change a habit, he must not do the particular behavior until that behavior is gone.  He must do another behavior which is opposite from the behvior that he wants to get rid of. >>He must replace it with a more desirable behavior which is the opposite of the behavior he wants to get rid of.

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