changing family

2020-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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I don`t want to change the sons because they are so lovely now. If I can change, I can change my husband. We have different personalities, hobbies, goals, and so on. I am a little more relaxed now Korea is a society where people live too fiercely. This makes us unable to look back at each other. If I can`t change it, I want to accept it, consider it, and understand it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mrs. [Name]. Thank you again for doing your homework. You did marvelous. GREAT JOB! Keep it up. See you later~

T. Jasper

Here are your corrections:

I don`t want to change the sons because they are so lovely now.

>> I don\'t want to change my sons because they are so lovely.

If I can change, I can change my husband.

>> If I can change someone, that would be my husband.

We have different personalities, hobbies, goals, and so on.

>> CORRECT

I am a little more relaxed now.

>> CORRECT

Korea is a society where people live too fiercely.

>> CORRECT

This makes us unable to look back at each other.

>> CORRECT

If I can`t change it, I want to accept it, consider it, and understand it.

>> CORRECT

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