Changing job
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I\'m a public servant. So I can\'t change my job. When I was young, I wanted to be a architect. I\'m preparing to get a license of architect. After retiring, I will design and construct my own house which is located in the nature.
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Hello, [이름]!
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Jean~~
I\'m a public servant. So I can\'t change my job.
>> I\'m a public servant so it\'s not practical or easy to change jobs.
>> [ [이름], I THINK IT\'S NOT A MATTER OF \"CAN\'T\" CHANGE JOBS BUT IT\'S A MATTER OF CHOICE, RIGHT? SO IT\'S NOT IT\'S NOT EXACTLY THAT YOU CAN\'T BUT YOU WON\'T. I CHANGED THE THOUGHT A BIT.]
When I was young, I wanted to be a architect.
>> Becoming an architect has always been my dream since I was young.
I\'m preparing to get a license of architect.
>> I\'m currently preparing to get a license to practice architecture.
>> or: I\'m currently preparing to get a license for architecture.
After retiring, I will design and construct my own house which is located in the nature.
>> After retiring, I will design and construct my own house, which is located in the nature.
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