Changing the past.
학생이 쓴 원문
I am not going to change a single thing that happened in the past even if I am given a chance to do it. It doesn\'t necessarily mean that I have absolutely nothing to regret or am satisfied with all of the details of my history, rather the opposite is far closer to the truth. In fact, I always think that being a Korean is one of the biggest disadvantages that one can possibly have. Since the country\'s culture features homogeneity and fast-paced lifestyle, I have undergone fierce competitions to prove my capability, in terms of how successful I am in comparison with others, ever since I entered a middle school while trying hard to make myself seem ordinary in every aspect. However, it turned out that being superior over others doesn\'t guarantee happiness and, actually, there is no finish line for the race of \"proving yourself competent\". However, I believe that regretting decisions and milestones that I have made throughout my entire life doesn\'t help me move on to another stage.
강사 첨삭
Hi Drexel! Thank you so much for this homework. I really appreciate your consistency with your practice. ^ ^
No qualms about it, I would say the same. Nothing much we can change nor regret about the past, but what is more important is learning from it and knowing how to move forward. ^^
For your 4th sentence; it\'s better to chunk it rather than having one long sentence. ^ ^ All in all, it\'s a good answer and composition. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
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It doesn\'t necessarily mean that I have absolutely nothing to regret or am satisfied with all of the details of my history, rather the opposite is far closer to the truth.
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In fact, I always think that being a Korean is one of the biggest disadvantages that one can possibly have.
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Since the country\'s culture features homogeneity and fast-paced lifestyle, I have undergone fierce competitions to prove my capability, in terms of how successful I am in comparison with others, ever since I entered a middle school while trying hard to make myself seem ordinary in every aspect.
>>Since the country\'s culture features homogeneity and fast-paced lifestyle, I have undergone fierce competitions to prove my capability; in terms of how successful I am compared to others.
>>Ever since I entered middle school I was trying hard to make myself seem ordinary in every aspect.
However, it turned out that being superior over others doesn\'t guarantee happiness and, actually, there is no finish line for the race of \"proving yourself competent\".
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However, I believe that regretting decisions and milestones that I have made throughout my entire life doesn\'t help me move on to another stage.
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