Characteristics from My Parents
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I inherited my curiosity and love for learning from my father. He always asks questions and likes to explore new ideas, and I am the same. From my mother, I inherited kindness and patience. She is very thoughtful and caring, and I try to be like her in my daily life.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jenny,
I truly love your writing here. It’s so heartfelt and beautifully expressed. The way you described the qualities you inherited from your parents shows not only your good English skills but also your maturity and gratitude toward your family. Your sentences are very clear, and you are getting better at expressing deeper thoughts in English. I can really see your growth, and I’m so proud of how you’re leveling up step by step. Keep writing with this kind of sincerity and confidence, I believe you have a real talent for expressing yourself in English.
I think I inherited my curiosity and love for learning from my father.
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OR>>I believe I got my curiosity and love for learning from my father.
He always asks questions and likes to explore new ideas, and I am the same.
>>CORRECT
OR>> He always asks questions and enjoys exploring new ideas, just like I do.
From my mother, I inherited kindness and patience.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I inherited kindness and patience from my mother.
She is very thoughtful and caring, and I try to be like her in my daily life.
>>CORRECT
OR>> She is thoughtful and caring, and I do my best to follow her example in my daily life.
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