Chat on line
학생이 쓴 원문
In the Past, I would chat on line many times.
It was interesting to meet someone on line.
I met many people on the internet
and I also had an offline meeting with some of them.
But The friendship made in online didn't last long.
I met them just one time.
and then I chatted with other people.
As time went by , I got tired of doing it.
So nowdays, I don't chat on line.
I can express my opinion online.
and I also see other's thinking about some matter.
I think that is enough.
In conclusion, I like surfing the intenet.
but I don't like chat on line.
강사 첨삭
I understand what you're talking about. You should just stick with chatting with the people you know. It's safer.-Teacher JM
In the Past, I would chat on line many times.
>>>I met many people on the internet and I personally met up with some of them, too.
But The friendship made in online didn't last long.
>>>In the past, I would chat online many times.
It was interesting to meet someone on line.
It was interesting to meet someone on line.
>>>Correct
I met many people on the internet and I also had an offline meeting with some of them.
>>>I met many people on the internet and I personally met up with some of them, too.
But The friendship made in online didn't last long.
>>>Sadly, the friendship made online didn't last that long.
I met them just one time.
and then I chatted with other people.
>>>I met them just one time and then I would chat with other people.
As time went by , I got tired of doing it.
>>>Correct
So nowdays, I don't chat on line.
I met them just one time.
and then I chatted with other people.
>>>I met them just one time and then I would chat with other people.
As time went by , I got tired of doing it.
>>>Correct
So nowdays, I don't chat on line.
>>>So nowadays, I don't chat on line anymore.
I can express my opinion online.and I also see other's thinking about some matter.
I can express my opinion online.and I also see other's thinking about some matter.
>>>I just express my opinion online and I just surf by sites containing other people's ideas about some matters.
I think that is enough.
>>>Correct.
In conclusion, I like surfing the intenet. but I don't like chat on line.
>>>Correct.
In conclusion, I like surfing the intenet. but I don't like chat on line.
>>>In conclusion, I like surfing the internet but I don't like chatting on line.
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