Chatting On line.
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I don't like chatting on line.
I used to chat on line with many people in the past.
But someday I realized that chatting online was meaningless.
because there were a lot of jerks who wanted to seduce girls on line.
That's why I don't like chatting online.
So I don't usually chat on line.
When I work, I chat on line with coworkers frequently.
Since there is a messenger program called "Single",
I can chat with someone who works for my company by that.
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I don't like chatting on line.
>>correct!I used to chat on line with many people in the past.
>>correct!But someday I realized that chatting online was meaningless.
>>correct!because there were a lot of jerks who wanted to seduce girls on line.
>>correct!That's why I don't like chatting online.
>>correct!So I don't usually chat on line.
>>correct!When I work, I chat on line with coworkers frequently.
>>correct!Since there is a messenger program called "Single",
>>correct!I can chat with someone who works for my company by that.
>>correct!
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