Chatting On line.

2010-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I don't like chatting on line. I used to chat on line with many people in the past. But someday I realized that chatting online was meaningless. because there were a lot of jerks who wanted to seduce girls on line. That's why I don't like chatting online. So I don't usually chat on line. When I work, I chat on line with coworkers frequently. Since there is a messenger program called "Single", I can chat with someone who works for my company by that.

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Hello there [이름] my dear, Its a happy Monday again!;0) Im so speachless with your writing skill...I love the way you express your thoughts and opinions about a certain topic and your writing skill is really impressive!I commend you for a job well done..;0) Continue what youre doing and I know, you will be much better in no time.. Talk to you again later my dear.. T.Cam I don't like chatting on line. >>correct!I used to chat on line with many people in the past. >>correct!But someday I realized that chatting online was meaningless. >>correct!because there were a lot of jerks who wanted to seduce girls on line. >>correct!That's why I don't like chatting online. >>correct!So I don't usually chat on line. >>correct!When I work, I chat on line with coworkers frequently. >>correct!Since there is a messenger program called "Single", >>correct!I can chat with someone who works for my company by that. >>correct!

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