chatting with my friends

2010-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Before I work here, I always used Nate-on messenger program when I use my computer. It was a kind of bridge between I and my friends. I didn't feel lonely even though I stayed alone in my room. But I can't use the messenger program in my office. Because my company set up a strong fire wall on my laptop. So I can't install any software programs. It was felt to me like a tregedy at first, but I found an exit. I use the chatting room on my on-line community of my choir these days. I'm so lucky. It is a kind of vitamin to me exhausted.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! What you shared is such a bad news on a Monday. We have the same case, because in our office, we are also not allowed to use any messenger. T. Jane ^^ Before I work here, I always used Nate-on messenger program when I use my computer. >> Before I worked here, I've always used Nate-on messenger when I use my computer. It was a kind of bridge between I and my friends. >> correct I didn't feel lonely even though I stayed alone in my room. >> correctBut I can't use the messenger program in my office. >> correct Because my company set up a strong fire wall on my laptop. >> correct So I can't install any software programs. >> correct It was felt to me like a tregedy at first, but I found an exit. >> It was like a tragedy to me at first, but I found a way out. I use the chatting room on my on-line community of my choir these days. >> I use the chatting room in my online community of our choir these days. I'm so lucky. >> correct It is a kind of vitamin to me exhausted. >> It is a kind of relief for my exhausted mind.

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