cheap long lasting
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umm maybe it is hard question..because each people think different about that issue. but in my opinion i love cheap one. you know
we have to consider every part of the product when we buy something. but if we buy long lasting product there must be some bad part. you know long lasting things are expensive right? after i buy long lasting things and find some error on it. i can\'t litter it because it is expensive!! but when i buy cheap one i can easliy throw away. so l think cheap produt is more efficient
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Hello Robin!
Thanks for this essay. Another tip for you to increase your score is to use various vocabulary or expressions. Use synonyms and not only the same words in your answer. That\'s how native speakers do it. ^^
Thanks for this essay. Another tip for you to increase your score is to use various vocabulary or expressions. Use synonyms and not only the same words in your answer. That\'s how native speakers do it. ^^
~T. Maine
>>Maybe it is a hard question because each person thinks differently about this issue.
but in my opinion i love cheap one.
>>But in my opinion I love a cheap one.
you know we have to consider every part of the product when we buy something.
>>You know we have to consider each part of the product when we buy something.
but if we buy long lasting product there must be some bad part.
>>But if we buy a long-lasting product there must be some bad parts of it.
you know long lasting things are expensive right?
>>You know long-lasting things are expensive, right?
after i buy long lasting things and find some error on it. i can\'t litter it because it is expensive!!
>>After I buy long-lasting things and find some errors in them, I can\'t throw them away because they are costly.
but when i buy cheap one i can easliy throw away.
>>But when I buy cheap ones, I can easily put them away.
so l think cheap produt is more efficient
>>So I think cheap products are more efficient and useful in some ways.
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