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학생이 쓴 원문
We should teach consistent and continuously moral habit in daily life to students.
Nowdays teachers don\'t try to discipline students because some bad parents protest and don\'t permit their student\'s immoral action.
It make our society a vicious cycle.
As the number of bad students increase , the number of bad adults increase.
The good people become victims. This is an unfair society.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
Train up a child in the way in which he/she should go, and when he is old, it will be his principle and life beliefs.
Thank you for writing your thoughts!
Aki~
We should teach consistent and continuously moral habit in daily life to students.
>>> We should teach consistent and continuous moral habits in daily life to students.
Nowdays teachers don\'t try to discipline students because some bad parents protest and don\'t permit their student\'s immoral action.
>>> Nowadays, teachers don\'t try to discipline students because some bad parents protest and don\'t permit their kids\' immoral actions.
It make our society a vicious cycle.
>>> It is a vicious cycle in our society.
As the number of bad students increase , the number of bad adults increase.
>>> As the number of bad students increases, the number of bad adults increases as well.
The good people become victims. This is an unfair society.
>>> CORRECT!
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