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2012-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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I'm a normal Korean. Korean are very diligent. When I went to the univercity, I usually woke up at 6A.M. in the early morning. Because I was a member of ROTC, I spent a lot of time to study and exercise. I left the univercity then going to navy, I lasted for getting up in the morning.

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Hi [이름],             I hope I got what you really meant hear. So you were and early bird before, but now you are the opposite. Am I right? -Tiny^0^ I\'m a normal Korean. >>CORRECT Korean are very diligent. >> Koreans are very diligent. When I went to the univercity, I usually woke up at 6A.M. in the early morning. >>SPELLING CHECK: university >> When I went to the university, I usually woke up at 6A.M. in the early morning. Because I was a member of ROTC, I spent a lot of time to study and exercise. >>CORRECT I left the univercity then going to navy, I lasted for getting up in the morning. >>SPELLING CHECK: university >> I left the university then joined the navy, I am last in getting up in the morning.

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