Check please
학생이 쓴 원문
Mr/Ms. [Name]
I am interested in the vidio game player of your company. I saw a looking of it through the web, I really want to buy it. I have a further question for its price. Could you tell me that I have to pay with only cash? I won't go out of the work place for time being, I can't help sending money for the product by card. I really want to send the reception of my question.
[이름]
manager, ABA hotel
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
It seems like you are tying to create a business letter out hear. Well aside from the corrections I made you have to check also the proper spacing for each part of the letter. Take care!
-T.Tiny^0^
Mr/Ms. [Name],
>>CORRECT
>>(OR) Sir/Ma\'am:I am interested in the vidio game player of your company.
>>SPELLING CHECK: video
I saw a looking of it through the web, I really want to buy it.
>> I saw it while looking through the web. I really want to buy it.
I have a further question for its price.
>> I have a further question about its price.
Could you tell me that I have to pay with only cash?
>> Could I only pay in cash?
>>(OR) What mode of payment do you accept?
I won\'t go out of the work place for time being, I can\'t help sending money for the product by card.
>> I can\'t go out of the work place for the time being, so I can\'t help sending money for the product by card.
I really want to send the reception of my question. >> (DID YOU MEAN THIS?)
>>I really want to receive the answer of my question, if you may.
[이름]
>>Yours trully,
>>[이름]manager, ABA hotel
>>Manager, ABA Hotel
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