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2012-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Mr/Ms. [Name] I am interested in the vidio game player of your company. I saw a looking of it through the web, I really want to buy it. I have a further question for its price. Could you tell me that I have to pay with only cash? I won't go out of the work place for time being, I can't help sending money for the product by card. I really want to send the reception of my question. [이름] manager, ABA hotel

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Hello [이름]! It seems like you are tying to create a business letter out hear. Well aside from the corrections I made you have to check also the proper spacing for each part of the letter. Take care! -T.Tiny^0^ Mr/Ms. [Name], >>CORRECT >>(OR) Sir/Ma\'am:I am interested in the vidio game player of your company. >>SPELLING CHECK: video I saw a looking of it through the web, I really want to buy it. >> I saw it while looking through the web. I really want to buy it. I have a further question for its price. >> I have a further question about its price. Could you tell me that I have to pay with only cash? >> Could I only pay in cash? >>(OR) What mode of payment do you accept? I won\'t go out of the work place for time being, I can\'t help sending money for the product by card. >> I can\'t go out of the work place for the time being, so I can\'t help sending money for the product by card. I really want to send the reception of my question. >> (DID YOU MEAN THIS?) >>I really want to receive the answer of my question, if  you may. [이름] >>Yours trully, >>[이름]manager, ABA hotel >>Manager, ABA Hotel

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