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To whom it concern
If you won't deliver to your staff, you'll be fired. I have been giving you a tons of chances. But you ignored those. Finally the representive of our company I have to make an informed decesion. I believe in this time, you'd rather follow my opinion.
sincerly
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Hi [이름],
I honestly didn\'t get what you really meant on this sentence \'Finally the representive of our company I have to make an informed decesion.\' I hope I corrected it according to your idea. Have a nice day!
-T.Tiny^0^
To whom it concern >>To whom it may concern:If you won\'t deliver to your staff, you\'ll be fired.
>> If you won\'t deliver to your stuff, you\'ll be fired.
I have been giving you a tons of chances.
>> I have been giving you tons of chances.
But you ignored those.
>>CORRECT
Finally the representive of our company I have to make an informed decesion.
>>SPELLING CHECK: representative; decision
>> Finally I have to make an informed decision and we will sent the representative of our company.
I believe in this time, you\'d rather follow my opinion.>> I believe this time, you\'d rather follow my suggestion.sincerly
>>Sincerely,
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