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2012-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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Jenny and Mimi are my friends for long time. we went to university harvard for three years while I was studying the theory of the dance. When I graduated from the university, I thought we're never gonig to see each other. But fortunaly I ran into two again in the club stage at night last summer. I saw Jenny dancing as the angel shake herself. So I love her myself from now on. But Mimi's activity is acwkard. She seems to like me. I don't want to the care from the person who has a paranoid mind . I'm concerned about this situation.

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Hi [이름],             I just want to take this chance to greet you Happy New Year again! Enjoy but don\'t drink too much. I will talk to you again soon. -T.Tiny^0^   Jenny and Mimi are my friends for long time. >>CORRECT we went to university harvard for three years while I was studying the theory of the dance. >> We went to Harvard University for three years while I was studying the theory of the dance. When I graduated from the university, I thought we\'re never gonig to see each other. >>SPELLING CHECK: going >> When I graduated from the university, I thought we\'re never going to see each other. But fortunaly I ran into two again in the club stage at night last summer. >>SPELLING CHECK: fortunately >> But fortunately I ran into them again in the club stage one night last summer. >>(OR)  But fortunately I ran into the two again in the club stage one night last summer. I saw Jenny dancing as the angel shake herself. >>CORRECT So I love her myself from now on. >>CORRECT But Mimi\'s activity is acwkard. >>SPELLING CHECK: awkward She seems to like me. >>CORRECT I don\'t want to the care from the person who has a paranoid mind. >> I don\'t want a care from a person who has a paranoid mind. >>(OR DID YOU MEAN?) I don\'t want care for a person who has a paranoid mind. I\'m concerned about this situation. >>CORRECT  

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