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2012-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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Mr. [Name] I urgently wnat to know your decision of annual convention Oct 5 at lotte hotel. I don't have enough time to wait for you. The PR department have to early know how many people will partisipate there. I would be Looking forward to your answer. Thank you for your concern Regards [이름]

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Hello [이름],             I hope you will have a nice weekend. Make the best out of it and thanks for your composition for today. Take care! -T.Tiny^0^   Mr. [Name]>>CORRECT. >>(BETTER) Dear [Name]. [Name], I urgently wnat to know your decision of annual convention Oct 5 at lotte hotel. >> I urgently want to know your decision regarding the annual convention on Oct. 5 at Lotte Hotel. I don\'t have enough time to wait for you. >>CORRECT The PR department have to early know how many people will partisipate there. >>SPELLING CHECK: participate >> The PR department have to early know how many people will partisipate there. I would be Looking forward to your answer. Thank you for your concern>>CORRECT >> I would be looking forward to your answer. Thank you for your concern.Regards>>Regards,Andress Kim >>CORRECT

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