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Mr. [Name]
I urgently wnat to know your decision of annual convention Oct 5 at lotte hotel. I don't have enough time to wait for you. The PR department have to early know how many people will partisipate there.
I would be Looking forward to your answer. Thank you for your concern
Regards
[이름]
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Hello [이름],
I hope you will have a nice weekend. Make the best out of it and thanks for your composition for today. Take care!
-T.Tiny^0^
Mr. [Name]>>CORRECT.
>>(BETTER) Dear [Name]. [Name], I urgently wnat to know your decision of annual convention Oct 5 at lotte hotel.
>> I urgently want to know your decision regarding the annual convention on Oct. 5 at Lotte Hotel.
I don\'t have enough time to wait for you.
>>CORRECT
The PR department have to early know how many people will partisipate there.
>>SPELLING CHECK: participate
>> The PR department have to early know how many people will partisipate there.
I would be Looking forward to your answer. Thank you for your concern>>CORRECT
>> I would be looking forward to your answer. Thank you for your concern.Regards>>Regards,Andress Kim
>>CORRECT
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