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학생이 쓴 원문
I woke up at noon today. I usully get up at 8 o'clock on sunday. I have a breakfast and then go to the church. After church time, I go to meet friends or to the gym. But my routine on sunday crashed today. Recently I've been tired to prepare the proposal. I submited the proposal, all member of our team celebrated that. we were drinking a lot. I think I went to karaoke with Myung-hee and Gee-su , singing 'lovely' by Kim jong-kuk. But I forgot that how to got to my home. When I got up in my bed, I found that I lay the bed. I had a headache. After I had a time to break, I'm getting better. I watched the TV all day long. Sometimes I think nothing special anything is good.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
You really were passed out last weekend. I'm glad you made it you're your room though you probably can't remember how you got home. Haha! Take care and don't drink too much next time. ^0^
-T.Tiny
I woke up at noon today.
>>CORRECT
I usully get up at 8 o\'clock on sunday.
>>SPELLING CHECK: usually
>> I usually get up at 8 o\'clock on Sunday.
I have a breakfast and then go to the church.
>>CORRECT
After church time, I go to meet friends or to the gym.
>> After church, I go to meet my friends or go to the gym.
But my routine on sunday crashed today.
>>CORRECT
>> But my routine on Sunday crashed today.
Recently I\'ve been tired to prepare the proposal.
>>CORRECT
>> (BETTER) Recently I\'ve been tired preparing the proposal.
I submited the proposal, all member of our team celebrated that.
>> I submitted the proposal and all member of our team celebrated that.
we were drinking a lot.
>>CORRECT
>>(BETTER) We drunk a lot.
I think I went to karaoke with Myung-hee and Gee-su , singing \'lovely\' by Kim jong-kuk.
>>CORRECT
>> I think I went to karaoke with Myung-hee and Gee-su singing \'lovely\' by Kim Jong-kuk.
But I forgot that how to got to my home.
>>But I forgot how to go home.
When I got up in my bed, I found that I lay the bed.
>> When I got up in my bed, I found that I'm lying on the bed.
I had a headache.
>>CORRECT
After I had a time to break, I\'m getting better.
>> After I had a break, I was getting better.
I watched the TV all day long.
>> I watched TV all day long.
Sometimes I think nothing special anything is good.
>> Sometimes I think anything is good even if there is nothing special.
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