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University activity I have had an interested in teamworks of various activitys. When I was a sepormore, I join in ROTC. I had to study hard not to cut out of ROTC and got up early to do trainings such as running, work out and military attitude. so I'm a industrious person as I have a challenge not to give up. During 4 years I had joined in brass band 'sea sound'. All students of my university wore a unform so I had thought 'it's gorgeous for me in uniform to play the musical instrument. I didn't have a vacation because I had to excercise the music for my vacation. But I have a lot of pleasure to play in the band in front of the stage. I never forget those experiance.

Hello  [이름],             Thanks for sharing something about your university days. You really seemed to be very serious about school before. Kk ^^ -T.Tiny^0^ University activity >>University ActivityI have had an interested in teamworks of various activitys. >>SPELLING CHECK: activities >>I have had an interest in teamworks of various activities. When I was a sepormore, I join in ROTC. >>SPELLING CHECK: sophomore >> When I was a sophomore, I joined in ROTC. I had to study hard not to cut out of ROTC and got up early to do trainings such as running, work out and military attitude. >> I had to study hard not to be cut out of ROTC and got up early to do trainings such as running, work out and military attitude. so I\'m a industrious person as I have a challenge not to give up. >> So I\'m an industrious person as I challenge myself not to give up. During 4 years I had joined in brass band \'sea sound\'. >> For 4 years I had joined in brass band \'sea sound\'. All students of my university wore a unform so I had thought \'it\'s gorgeous for me in uniform to play the musical instrument. >> All students of my university wore a uniform so I had thought it\'s gorgeous for me to be in a uniform to play the musical instrument. I didn\'t have a vacation because I had to excercise the music for my vacation. >> I didn\'t have a vacation because I had to practice playing a musical instrument. But I have a lot of pleasure to play in the band in front of the stage. I never forget those experiance. >>SPELLING CHECK: experience >> But I have a lot of pleasure to play in the band in front of the stage. I never forget those experience.