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Feb 4th 2006 I had a critical toothache. I thought the problem is the wisdom teeth. I didn't even have sleep a little. I made a reservation for the dentist. I don't know why I am afraid to go to the dentist. He is good person whose voice is smoosely and kind. I like his smile. If I met at place which is not a hospital, I would really think we are a good friends. That's good just consultant time. But when I was about to sit in the chair to treat I got scary a lot. He change Dr. [Name] from Dr. jekyll. Suddenly I change the small coward by him. I asked him that don't treat me not to hurt, but he gave me much pain. Going to the dentist is very dreadful.

That was a very interesting composition. I think most people are afraid of the dentist. So we gotta take care of our teeth so that we won\'t have to visit them. Here are my corrections:   Feb 4th 2006>>Correct!I had a critical toothache. >>I had a terrible toothache.  I thought the problem is the wisdom teeth. >>Correct!  I didn\'t even have sleep a little. >>I didn\'t even get enough sleep. >>I wan\'t able to sleep well.  I made a reservation for the dentist. >>I made an appointment with the dentist.  I don\'t know why I am afraid to go to the dentist. >>Correct! He is good person whose voice is smoosely and kind. >>He is a good person whose voice is smooth and kind. I like his smile. >>Correct! If I met at place which is not a hospital, I would really think we are a good friends. >>If I met him in a different place other than a hospital, he would certainly be my good friend.  That\'s good just consultant time. >>I arrived on time for my consultation.  But when I was about to sit in the chair to treat I got scary a lot. >>But as I sat and was about to have my treatment, I got really scared.  He change Dr. [Name] from Dr. jekyll. >>He changed from Dr. [Name] to Dr. [Name]. Suddenly I change the small coward by him. >>Suddenly I crouched like a small coward in front of him. I asked him that don\'t treat me not to hurt, but he gave me much pain. >>I asked him to make it as pain-free as possible, but it was still excruciating.  Going to the dentist is very dreadful. >>Correct!