Check these sentences please
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Today..
It's very tired day.
It's weired, because I didn't especially something.
I just lead that isn't diffrent another day.(It was a general day)
But I felt as if I do something special today.
Also I don't feel so good.
I don't want to be tiered tomorrow.
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I watche a movie that the title is 'Tin Tin:The secret of the Unicorn'
It's an animation movie which directed by 'Steven Spilberg.
Radically the movie motivated by the book.
Diredtor made the film that book.
I like animation movies because that is very interesting and fantastic. Sometimes I suprised their imaginative power.
강사 첨삭
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Today..
>> correct
It\'s very tired day.
>> I am very tired today.
It\'s weired,because I didin\'t especially something.
>>It\'s weird,because I didn\'t do anything special today.
>>I just lead that isn\'t different another day. It was a general day.
>>It was a simple day for me.
Also I don\'t feel so good today.
>> I don\'t feel good today.
I don\'t want to be tiered tomorrow.
>>I don\'t wanna get tired tomorrow.
>> I don\'t want feel tired tomorrow.
spellings :
1.weired - weird
2.tiered - tired
I watche a movie that the title is \'Tin Tin:The secret of the Unicorn,
>>I watched the movie \'The Adventure of Tin-tin: Secret of the Unicorn\".
It\'s an animation movie which directed by Steven Spielberg.
>> correctRadically the movie motivated by the book.
>>Radically the movie was based on a book.
Diredtor made the film that book.
>> The Director was the one who wrote the book.
I like animation movies because that is very interesting and fantastic. Sometimes I suprised their imaginative power. >> I like animation movies because it is very interesting and fantastic. And sometimes I enjoy watching it with thier special effect.
spellings:
1.watche - watched
2. diredtor - director
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