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2012-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

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Today.. It's very tired day. It's weired, because I didn't especially something. I just lead that isn't diffrent another day.(It was a general day) But I felt as if I do something special today. Also I don't feel so good. I don't want to be tiered tomorrow. ==================================================================== I watche a movie that the title is 'Tin Tin:The secret of the Unicorn' It's an animation movie which directed by 'Steven Spilberg. Radically the movie motivated by the book. Diredtor made the film that book. I like animation movies because that is very interesting and fantastic. Sometimes I suprised their imaginative power.

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Hello! Thank you for making a composition. You are very good trying to construct a sentence.I know that you can be better in our class. but you did very good ! :)   Today.. >> correct It\'s very tired day. >> I am very tired today. It\'s weired,because I didin\'t especially something. >>It\'s weird,because I didn\'t do anything special today. >>I just lead that isn\'t different another day. It was a general day. >>It was a simple day for me. Also I don\'t feel so good today. >> I don\'t feel good today. I don\'t want to be tiered tomorrow. >>I don\'t wanna get tired tomorrow. >> I don\'t want feel tired tomorrow.   spellings : 1.weired - weird 2.tiered  - tired   I watche a movie that the title is \'Tin Tin:The secret of the Unicorn, >>I watched the movie \'The Adventure of Tin-tin: Secret of the Unicorn\". It\'s an animation movie which directed by Steven Spielberg. >> correctRadically the movie motivated by the book. >>Radically the movie was based on a book. Diredtor made the film that book. >> The Director was the one who wrote the book. I like animation movies because that is very interesting and fantastic. Sometimes I suprised their imaginative power. >> I like animation movies because it is very interesting and fantastic. And sometimes I enjoy watching it with thier special effect.   spellings: 1.watche - watched 2. diredtor - director      

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