Check these sentences, please(2)

2012-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Razel

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Could you please check these sentences? 1. I'm going to meet my friend in a restaurant near my house tomorrow noon, because she is going to back her country after 3 weeks. 2. I'm going to do big clean up my house, because if I clean my house on friday I can take a rest well on weekend . 3. I'm going to go a festival for a traditional marching here on Sunday. 4. I'll probably study at home. 5. I'll go to bed. 6. I don't know where I'll be. 7. I'll probably be in England. 8. I might go to England next year. 9. I might be an expert of survey analyst in the near future. 10.I might see a movie at night.

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Happy Friday! Thank you for sharing this composition with me. Here are my corrections:   Could you please check these sentences? >>CORRECT1. I\'m going to meet my friend in a restaurant near my house tomorrow noon, because she is going to back her country after 3 weeks.>>I\'m going to meet my friend tomorrow noon in a restaurant near my house because she is going back to her country 3 weeks from now.2. I\'m going to do big clean up my house, because if I clean my house on friday I can take a rest well on weekend .>>I\'m going to clean my house on Friday so I can take a rest on weekend.3. I\'m going to go a festival for a traditional marching here on Sunday.>>I\'m going to attend a festival here on Sunday as part of our tradition.4. I\'ll probably study at home.>>CORRECT5. I\'ll go to bed.>>CORRECT6. I don\'t know where I\'ll be.>>CORRECT7. I\'ll probably be in England.>>CORRECT8. I might go to England next year.>>CORRECT9. I might be an expert of survey analyst in the near future.>>I might be an expert survey analyst in the near future.10.I might see a movie at night. >>CORRECT 

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