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2012-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of taking classes during the summer? I think there are more disadvantages than advantages because it is not helpful to take a classes during the summer. According to prevous education system about 500 years ago, ancestors did not give a lecture but hung out with their students on the beach or moutain. And the teachers said "Taking a rest is important to study". These days, the present teachers said "If there is no the summer vacation, we are going to die". They added more "It is a necessary to take a break not only for us but also students". Through the free time, students would figure out what they do for their lifes by themselves. Taking a class during the summer probably has own advantages. However it is not efficient for students to study. They will not concentrate their class because they are tired of studying long time. Therefore, taking classes during the summer should be prohibited.

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Hi there! I certainly agree with you, only if the students are smart but for the students who did not do well on the past school days, they should take a summer class.In my country, if you failed to pass your subject, you should take a summer class to be able to move on to the next level. Thank you for the wonderful thoughts. I hope to read more interesting answers soon. See you! T.Chloe What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of taking classes during the summer?I think there are more disadvantages than advantages because it is not helpful to take a classes during the summer.   According to prevous education system about 500 years ago, ancestors did not give a lecture but hung out with their students on the beach or moutain. >> According to the previous education system about 500 years ago, our ancestors did not give a lecture but hung out with their studend on the beach or mountain. And the teachers said,\"Taking a rest is important to study\". >> Correct!These days, the present teachers said \"If there is no the summer vacation, we are going to die\". >> These days, the present teachers says, \"If there is no summer vacation, we are going to die\". >>OR These days, the present teachers says, \"If there is no summer vacation, we will die\". They added more \"It is a necessary to take a break not only for us but also students\". >> They also added more like, \"It is necessary to take a break not only for us but also students\". Through the free time, students would figure out what they do for their lifes by themselves. >>Through the free time, students would figure out what they have done to themselves. >>OR Through the free time, students would figure out what they have done to their lives.Taking a class during the summer probably has own advantages. >> Taking a class during summer probably has it own advantages. However it is not efficient for students to study. >> Correct! They will not concentrate their class because they are tired of studying long time. >> They will not concentrate on their class because they are tired of studying for a long time. Therefore, taking classes during the summer should be prohibited. >> Therefore, taking classes during summer should be prohibited.

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