Cheetah vs Elephant
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Hi [이름]! ^^
So, you are addicted to tigers and cheetahs. hehe.
Well, I like those animals too. They are like the most awesome animals on the planet.
So, you will have a soccer match soon. Good luck with that.
Do your best. :)
I will see you in our next class. :)
Take care.
~~ Teacher Kris
My favorite animal is tigers. Because my favorite baseball team is Kia Tigers.
>> My favorite animals are tigers because my favorite baseball team is the Kia Tigers.
My countries shape is similar with tigers.
>> The shape of my country is similar with the tigers.
Cheetah is faster than tigers.
>> Cheetahs are faster than tigers.
And it is strong.
>> And, they are strong.
I don\'t like lion.
>> I don\'t like lions.
Tigers is very brave.
>> Tigers are very brave.
Elephant is very huge.
>> Elephants are very huge.
Elephant has very long nose.
>> Elephants have long trunks.
Elephant looks like fool.
>> Elephants are fools.
I will have a soccer match.
>> Correct
I don\'t know when.
>> Correct
When I make a score I will do a \"T\"cermony.
>> When I make a score, I will do the \"T\" ceremony.
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