Cheetah vs Elephant

2016-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

My favorite animal is tigers.Because my favorite baseball team is Kia Tigers.My countries shape is similar with tigers.Cheetah is faster than tigers.And it is strong.I don't like lion.Tigers is very brave.Elephant is very huge.Elephant has very long nose.Elephant looks like fool.I will have a soccer match.I don't know when.When I make a score I will do a "T"cermony.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

So, you are addicted to tigers and cheetahs. hehe.

Well, I like those animals too. They are like the most awesome animals on the planet.

So, you will have a soccer match soon. Good luck with that.

Do your best. :)


I will see you in our next class. :)


Take care.


~~ Teacher Kris


My favorite animal is tigers. Because my favorite baseball team is Kia Tigers.

>> My favorite animals are tigers because my favorite baseball team is the Kia Tigers.

My countries shape is similar with tigers.

>> The shape of  my country is similar with the tigers.

Cheetah is faster than tigers.

>> Cheetahs are faster than tigers.

And it is strong.

>> And, they are strong.

I don\'t like lion.

>> I don\'t like lions.

Tigers is very brave.

>> Tigers are very brave.

Elephant is very huge.

>> Elephants are very huge.

Elephant has very long nose.

>> Elephants have long trunks.

Elephant looks like fool.

>> Elephants are fools.

I will have a soccer match.

>> Correct

I don\'t know when.

>> Correct

When I make a score I will do a \"T\"cermony.

>> When I make a score, I will do the \"T\" ceremony.

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