Chelsea! Homework slip.
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Yesterday's the past, tomorrow's the future, but today is a gift. That's why it's called the present.
-Bil Keane
why do you give me an advice instead of homework?
All right.
Today is a gift........................
ok, sir.
Many peole realize that present is important than both past and future.
I feel a everythig becuase I now aliving.
I can't write because My english skill is not good.
but I think that chelsea know my thinking.
Chelsea! Have a great day and take care.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the homework I gave you.
I hope you continue polishing your skills so that you can write longer compositions next time.
Have a great weekend!!
~ T. Chelsea
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Yesterday\'s the past, tomorrow\'s the future, but today is a gift. That\'s why it\'s called the present.-Bil Keanewhy do you give me an advice instead of homework?
>> Why do you give me an advice instead of a homework?All right. >> Correct.
Today is a gift........................>> Correct.
ok, sir.
>> Correct.Many peole realize that present is important than both past and future.>> Many people don\'t realize that the present is more important than both past and the future.
I feel a everythig becuase I now aliving.
>> I feel everything because I am alive.I can\'t write because My english skill is not good.
>> I can\'t write well because my English skill is not good.
but I think that chelsea know my thinking. >> But I think that Chelsea knows my thoughts.Chelsea! Have a great day and take care.
>> Correct.
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