Chelsea! Homework slip.

2013-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Yesterday's the past, tomorrow's the future, but today is a gift. That's why it's called the present. -Bil Keane why do you give me an advice instead of homework? All right. Today is a gift........................ ok, sir. Many peole realize that present is important than both past and future. I feel a everythig becuase I now aliving. I can't write because My english skill is not good. but I think that chelsea know my thinking. Chelsea! Have a great day and take care.

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Hello there! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the homework I gave you. I hope you continue polishing your skills so that you can write longer compositions next time. Have a great weekend!! ~ T. Chelsea   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Yesterday\'s the past, tomorrow\'s the future, but today is a gift. That\'s why it\'s called the present.-Bil Keanewhy do you give me an advice instead of homework? >> Why do you give me an advice instead of a homework?All right. >> Correct. Today is a gift........................>> Correct. ok, sir. >> Correct.Many peole realize that present is important than both past and future.>> Many people don\'t realize that the present is more important than both past and the future. I feel a everythig becuase I now aliving. >> I feel everything because I am alive.I can\'t write because My english skill is not good. >> I can\'t write well because my English skill is not good. but I think that chelsea know my thinking. >> But I think that Chelsea knows my thoughts.Chelsea! Have a great day and take care. >> Correct.

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