Cherry Blossom{02/10}
학생이 쓴 원문
I think Seokchon lake cherry blossom festival was famous and interesting.
Seokchon lake was near by Lotte World so many peopol come.
I think Seokchon lake is butiful and famous.
Seokchon lake and Lotte World was the pride of our contry!!
Hello, Jean,
I\'m Suzie. How are you?^^
I\'ve heard it\'s almost current book. so could you give your advise for next step?
I\'ve checked these courses \'basic action words\' \' free talking\',\'English newspaper course\' in the website.
so need your favorable recommendation.
Thanks in advance^^
Suzie
강사 첨삭
Hello, Suzie!
It\'s been awhile. I\'m glad you wrote to me about [이름]\'s textbook. May I suggest that she try Junior Free Talking 1. This study material would be a level up for her but I believe she can handle it. The book would be beneficial to her. Please do check it out and let me know.
Cheers,
Jean~~
I think Seokchon lake cherry blossom festival was famous and interesting.
>> I think the Seokchon lake cherry blossom festival is famous and interesting.
Seokchon lake was near by Lotte World so many peopol come.
>> Seokchon lake is near Lotte World so many people go to the festival.
I think Seokchon lake is butiful and famous.
>> I find Seokchon lake beautiful and famous.
Seokchon lake and Lotte World was the pride of our contry!!
>> Seokchon lake and Lotte World are the pride of our country!!
NOTE FOR [이름]: May I just point out that it became your habit to use the past form of the verb WAS. Please be more mindful when you use this word.
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