Cherrybloosms Festival.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
It\'\'s time to see beautiful cherrybloosm.
>> It\'s time to see the beautiful cherry blossom.
Cherrybloosms bloomed in Seokchon Lake. And last week many people visited to see cherrybloosm in Seockon Lake.
>> Cherry blossom bloomed in Seokchon Lake and last week, many people visited the place to see the cherry blossom.
But today it was raining so the flower will be fall.
>> But today, it rained so the flowers fell.
My homeroom teacher and my classmates were supposed to go Seockon Lake and eat hamburger but I don\'t whether they went or not.
>> My homeroom teacher and my classmates were supposed to go to Seockchon Lake and eat hamburger, but I don\'t know whether they went or not.
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