CHICKEN┏√守───━

2014-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

I eat some chicken. It is very delicious. My mother but it. But, I can't eat much thing. Because I'm full. I go to academy early. But I come to my home late. It is so sad. gooD ByE

강사 첨삭

Wow! Yes, I believe that you are really full. It is so good to have a happy tummy so I am happy for you. You will surely have a deep sleep tonight. So, take a rest now. I will call you again tomorrow dear. Sleep well and sweet dreams! -Teacher Chloe I eat some chicken. >>I ate some chicken.It is very delicious. >>They were delicious.My mother but it. >>My mother bought them. But, I can\'t eat much thing. >>But I couldn\'t eat much. Because I\'m full. >>Because I was full. I go to academy early. >>I went to the academy early. But I come to my home late. >>But I came home late.It is so sad. >>It made me sad. gooD ByE >>Goodbye!

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