CHICKEN┏√守───━
학생이 쓴 원문
I eat some chicken.
It is very delicious.
My mother but it.
But, I can't eat much thing.
Because I'm full.
I go to academy early.
But I come to my home late.
It is so sad.
gooD ByE
강사 첨삭
Wow!
Yes, I believe that you are really full.
It is so good to have a happy tummy so I am happy for you.
You will surely have a deep sleep tonight.
So, take a rest now.
I will call you again tomorrow dear.
Sleep well and sweet dreams!
-Teacher Chloe
I eat some chicken.
>>I ate some chicken.It is very delicious.
>>They were delicious.My mother but it.
>>My mother bought them. But, I can\'t eat much thing.
>>But I couldn\'t eat much. Because I\'m full.
>>Because I was full. I go to academy early.
>>I went to the academy early. But I come to my home late.
>>But I came home late.It is so sad.
>>It made me sad.
gooD ByE
>>Goodbye!
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