chicken

I went to a grocery store with my rommmate to buy a side dish. I heard a noise that a chicken cheeps. The owner of the store could give it to me if I want. I hesitated a little. However, my rommate and I decided to take it because it was very cute. Jessica, thank you for your corrections!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^*

Hi, [이름]! Thanks for your composition. It was an interesting  and funny story. I'll see you  tomorrow, [이름]! I went to a grocery store with my rommmate to buy a side dish. >>I went to a grocery store with my roommate to buy a side dish.I heard a noise that a chicken cheeps. >>I heard a chirping noise from a chicken.The owner of the store could give it to me if I want. >>CORRECT >>The owner of the store said he could give it to me if I want. -->>BETTERI hesitated a little. >>CORRECTHowever, my rommate and I decided to take it because it was very cute.>>However, my roommate and I decided to take it because it was very cute.Jessica, thank you for your corrections!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^* >>CORRECT