chicken
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to eat chicken. My dad eat chicken with bear and leek. I also like to eat chicken with some spicy sauce. I drink cola when I eat chicken. I don't like chicken with bones but dad likes to eat chicken with bones because he said that it is more tastier with biting off the cjicken. my sister doesn't like chicken with bones she just like chicken that has no bones. My mum doesn't like to eat meey but she eats chicken a little. I hope that my mum will eat meet so our family could go to the restraunt and eat steak.
what kind of meet do you like? what is your favourite?
강사 첨삭
Hi Min!:)
Happy Thursday!
When it comes to meat, I\'d eat any dish or recipe of it. My favorite is chicken and pork barbeque. It\'s perfect with java rice or fried rice. As for beef, any dish will do as long as it\'s cooked well. I\'ve tried eating lamb but it was medium rare so I didn\'t like the taste :(
Thank you for this composition. It made me hungry (just kidding :p).
See you in class!^_^
~T. Mayleen~
I like to eat chicken.
>> Correct!
My dad eat chicken with bear and leek.
>> My dad eat chicken with beer and leek.
I also like to eat chicken with some spicy sauce.
>> I also like chicken with spicy sauce.
I drink cola when I eat chicken.
>> Correct!
I don\'t like chicken with bones but dad likes to eat chicken with bones because he said that it is more tastier with biting off the cjicken.
>> I don\'t like chicken with bones but my dad likes it. He said it\'s tastier when your biting it off the bone.
my sister doesn\'t like chicken with bones she just like chicken that has no bones.
>> My sister only likes boneless chicken.
My mum doesn\'t like to eat meey but she eats chicken a little.
>> My mom doesn\'t like to eat meat but she eats chicken at times.
I hope that my mum will eat meet so our family could go to the restraunt and eat steak.
>> I hope my mom would eat meat so we could go to a steak restaurant.what kind of meet do you like? what is your favourite?
>> What is your favorite meat dish?
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.