Chicken Game

2015-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Chicken Game is a kind of play originated from the Gang group in the United States in 1950s. It is a game that two cars start at both side end of the narrow road to clash each other and the one who avoid first became a loser. The man who stand longer time can be a winner. The balance of Chicken Game is that one is going straight to clash and the other is avoiding. Exactly speaking, both side is going striaght to clash at first and one of them turn a wheel to void clash finally. Now, the problem is which become more realization between the two banalnces. In my point, It is the most ideal and beneficial that I go straight and others avoid by showing them clealy that I would not avoid and let them avoid me eventually. P.S ; I would like know about the differnces between a word of Clash and Crash. Thank you for reading!!

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Dear [Name]. [이름],   A blissful Tuesday to you! ^.^   First of all, I commend you for having a perfect spacing. You really made your composition properly. Very Good! ^^   By the way, thank you for making your composition. Through it, I learned something. It is my first time to know about Chicken Game, and I find it very interesting. Frankly speaking, I would like to try it.   Anyway, you did a well-written writting, but you committed some mistakes in relation with ARTICLES, SPELLING and CAPITALIZATION. I would like you to see the corrections and suggestions for your better understanding of what I mean.   Anyhow, about your question, they have many differences. Let me try to explain their difference by giving you their meaning. Clash and Crash can both be used as nouns and verbs, but Crash can also be used as an adjective. When we talk about them being nouns, Clash is a short fight between two people and group. While Crash is an accident in which a vehicle hit something. As verbs, Clash is to come together and fight or compete in a contest, but Crash is to hit an object or another vehicle, causing damage. In addition, I said before that Crash can also be used as an adjective, so in using it, this word can only be used before a noun, and it means involving hard work or a lot of effort over a short period of time in order to achieve quick results.   That\'s all for now! ^^ I hope I answered your question well. Have a happy time reading my reply. See you very soon! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Chicken Game is a kind of play originated from the Gang group in the United States in 1950s. >> Chicken Game is a kind of play originated from a gang group in the United States in 1950s. (You use THE to indicate that the noun after it is unique, particular or specific.) It is a game that two cars start at both side end of the narrow road to clash each other and the one who avoid first became a loser. >> It is a game that two cars start on both side ends of a narrow road to class each other, and the one who avoids first will become the loser. (Check your articles.) >> OR: It is a game that two cars start on both sides of a narrow road to bump each other, and the one who avoids first will be the loser. The man who stand longer time can be a winner. >> The man who stands longer time can be the winner. (When your subject is SINGULAR your verb should be SINGULAR, too. STAND should STANDS. A WINNER should be THE WINNER, since there will be one winner in one set of the said game.) The balance of Chicken Game is that one is going straight to clash and the other is avoiding. >> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: The balance of Chicken Game is that one goes straight to clash his opponent and the other avoids.) Exactly speaking, both side is going striaght to clash at first and one of them turn a wheel to void clash finally. >> Exactly speaking, both sides go straight to class at first and one of them turns his wheels to avoid the clash finally. (STRIAGHT should be STRAIGHT. When you inform a fact, it is better to make all verbs in PRESENT SIMPLE TENSE. IS GOING should be GO. TURN should be TURNS because of ONE OF THEM.) Now, the problem is which become more realization between the two banalnces. >> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: Now, the problem is more on the realization of the two balances. In my point, It is the most ideal and beneficial that I go straight and others avoid by showing them clealy that I would not avoid and let them avoid me eventually. >> In my point, it is the most ideal and beneficial that I go straight and others avoid by showing them clealy that I would not avoid and let them avoid me eventually. (Your I in IT should not be capitalized.) >> BETTER: In my point, it os the most ideal and beneficial that I go straight and others avoid me by showing them clearly that I will just hold on to the clash, and it will let them avoid me eventually.P.S ; I would like know about the differnces between a word of Clash and Crash. >> P.S.: I would like to know about the difference or differences between of the words Clash and Crash. (There should be a DOT after S. The SEMICOLON should be a COLON. A WORD OF should be OF THE WORDS.) Thank you for reading!! >> CORRECT!

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