child\'s labor
학생이 쓴 원문
It is very unfortunate that young teenagers work illegally before 15.
Maybe some teenagers might be forced to work for a living or family.
But many teenagers want to earn money early without their parents knowing to buy somethings or enjoy entertainment.
Rightly , this is a social evil.
Employers are strictly punished and forced to stop business.
Also we should educate teenagers about the problems of illegal labor.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and to be honest, I am surprised that it also happens in your country. This kind of scenario is common in the Philippines and other countries striving to earn money. I remember as a child, I had some friends selling something to earn for their pocket money for school, but our government prohibited that.
Talk to you later.
Aki~
It is very unfortunate that young teenagers work illegally before 15.
>>>Unfortunately, young teenagers work illegally before 15.
Maybe some teenagers might be forced to work for a living or family.
>>> CORRECT!
But many teenagers want to earn money early without their parents knowing to buy somethings or enjoy entertainment.
>>> But many teenagers want to earn money early without their parent\'s knowledge or consent to buy something or enjoy entertainment.
Rightly, this is a social evil.
>>> CORRECT!
Employers are strictly punished and forced to stop business.
>>> CORRECT!
Also we should educate teenagers about the problems of illegal labor.
>>> CORRECT!
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