childhood
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Hello Ssun!
Please take note of the suggestions below.
Familiarize yourself with the correct expressions.
Always review your work.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
It will be diffrent for each person.
>> I think it\'s different for everyone.
I think that maybe it can be.
>> I think it might be true.
Childhood is the best time that we don\'t have to worry about anything.
>> Childhood is the best time because we don\'t have to worry about anything.
And childhood is the time that we undergo everything for the first time.
>> Childhood is when we can try things for the first time.
So everything is curious and amazing.
>> We are curious about everything and we think everything is amazing.
But life is present.
>> Life is a present.
Whenever we can think the best time of life.
>> Anytime could be the best time of our lives.
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