Childhood
학생이 쓴 원문
I was happy from middle school to high school 1 grade. Because i liked to play soccer with my male friends
Of cause,nowadays i like to play soccer,but i cant play soccer because my knees is not good
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>>> I was happy from middle school to first-grade high school.
Because i liked to play soccer with my male friends
>>> Because I liked playing soccer with my male friends.
>>> Because I liked playing soccer with my male friends.
Of cause,nowadays i like to play soccer,but i cant play soccer because my knees is not good
>>> Of course, nowadays, I still like playing soccer but I can\'t play soccer because my knees are not as strong anymore.
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