Childhood memory and things I'd love to see.
학생이 쓴 원문
Childhood memory.
I grew up under my grandparents until finished elementary school and I used to visit my parents' place, demoted rural area, every vacation.
There were quite different to grandparents' and something exciting place to me. So I was always looking forward to vacation.
Summer vacation was more delighted. I enjoyed swimming and fishing at a streamlet. Most of all, there are many kinds of fruits, foods and even I've never had fruits that grow at mountain.
I'd love to go there someday.
Things I'd love to see.
I'm kind of 'curious person' so I have tons of things I love to see in the world.
If I have to choose one of them, It would be the most beautiful scene of sun set. See you soon. Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for sharing your childhood experiences with me. I can say that you really had fun. Well, for your dream of going around the world, I hope that you get to fulfill that dream. Just keep on believing and work hard for it. Take care! ^_^
Childhood memory.
>> CorrectI grew up under my grandparents until finished elementary school and I used to visit my parents' place, demoted rural area, every vacation.
>> I grew up with my grandparents until I finished elementary and I used to visit my parents’ place in a rural area every vacation.There were quite different to grandparents' and something exciting place to me.
>> They were quite different from my grandparents and I also think that the place where my parents lived was much more exciting.
So I was always looking forward to vacation.
>> So I always look forward to vacation.Summer vacation was more delighted.
>> Summer vacation was delightful.
I enjoyed swimming and fishing at a streamlet.
>> Correct
Most of all, there are many kinds of fruits, foods and even I've never had fruits that grow at mountain.
>> There were also many kinds of fruits that grew in the mountain and many kinds of food.I'd love to go there someday.
>> I’d love to go there again.Things I'd love to see.
>> CorrectI'm kind of 'curious person' so I have tons of things I love to see in the world.
>> I’m kind of curious so I love to see a lot of things in the world.If I have to choose one of them, It would be the most beautiful scene of sun set.
>> If I had to choose what I want to see best, It would be the most beautiful scene of the sunset.
See you soon. Bye.
>> Correct
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