Childhood toys keep their sentimental value for life. What was your favorite toy growing up?
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When i was young i had a lot of toys at my home. But i specially liked to playing with Lego. Because at that time, i was extreme shy boy, so i didn\'t like to hang out with the other friends. I just would like to play alone at home. Thus, I naturally had more time to play with Lego, enjoyed the time. I later learned that a child playing with Lego is more creative than other children. I don\'t know if that\'s true or not, but I just liked the moment when I lived in a world of my own with Lego. when i was played with Lego, i can make any country and hero even if that is fiction. Sometimes i remember that i played with Lego. I really miss the moment.
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Childhood memories my dear! :)
>> When I was young, I had a lot of toys at home but I especially love playing with Lego\'s.
Because at that time, i was extreme shy boy, so i didn\'t like to hang out with the other friends.
>> At that time, I was an extremely shy boy, so I didn\'t like to hang out with my other friends.
I just would like to play alone at home. Thus, I naturally had more time to play with Lego, enjoyed the time.
>> I just would like to play alone at home. Thus, I naturally had more time to play with Lego\'s, and I enjoyed the time I spent playing with it.
I later learned that a child playing with Lego is more creative than other children.
>> I later learned that a child playing with Lego is more creative than playing with other kids.
I don\'t know if that\'s true or not, but I just liked the moment when I lived in a world of my own with Lego.
>> I don\'t know if that\'s true or not, but I just liked playing with Lego\'s at the moment. I felt like I was living a another life with my Lego\'s.
when i was played with Lego, i can make any country and hero even if that is fiction.
>> When I was playing with it, I was able to make different countries and heroes of my liking.
Sometimes i remember that i played with Lego. I really miss the moment.
>> Sometimes I remember how I played with it. I really miss that moment.
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