Children
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I think people should have one or two. Because Korea doesn\'t have many children so I think people have one or two children. But I think three is very hard. So people are good for maximum two.
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Hi, [이름]! Thank you for your response. I like your idea. Two should be okay because raising children is difficult and expensive. I hope Korea will have a better population size soon. See you!
--Teacher Anji
I think people should have one or two. Because Korea doesn\'t have many children so I think people have one or two children. But I think three is very hard. So people are good for maximum two.
>> I think people should have one or two children because Korea doesn\'t have many children. But I think three is very hard, so maximum of two should be good for people.
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