Children can achieve anything if they try hard enough.
학생이 쓴 원문
Children can grow up with confidence and ownership if they try hard enough and have the experience of failure and success.
However, they can be focused on achieving perfection and avoiding a risk depending on their character.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Ms. [Name]~!^^ How\'s your day going? I appreciate your effort on doing your homework. Keep it up!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Children can grow up with confidence and ownership if they try hard enough and have the experience of failure and success.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
However, they can be focused on achieving perfection and avoiding the risk depending on their character.
However, they can be focused on achieving perfection and avoiding the risk depending on their character.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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