Children\'s Day and May
학생이 쓴 원문
In Korea, people celebrate Children\'s Day playing in amusement park. Also many cities celebrate a festival in their cities, so local residents enjoy a festival. There are many events in Children\'s Day. Markets do sale and many products for children are on sale. In Korea, May is the month of Family. May 5th is Children\'s Day and May 8th is Parents\' Day. Parents\' Day is not holiday, but many people celebrate it. In addition, May 15th is Teacher\'s Day and May 2nd is my birthday. So I like the May^^ There are many celebrating day in May.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your answer and for doing your homework.
The month of May is indeed full of celebrations. ^^
It\'s a great month!
~Teacher Gina
>> In Korea, people celebrate Children\'s Day by playing in an amusement park.
Also, many cities celebrate a festival in their cities, so local residents enjoy a festival.
>> CORRECT.
There are many events in Children\'s Day.
>> There are many events on Children\'s Day.
Markets do sale and many products for children are on sale.
>> Markets have a sale and many products for children are on sale.
In Korea, May is the month of Family.
>> CORRECT.
May 5th is Children\'s Day and May 8th is Parents\' Day.
>> CORRECT.
Parents\' Day is not holiday, but many people celebrate it.
>> Parents\' Day is not a holiday, but many people celebrate it.
In addition, May 15th is Teacher\'s Day and May 2nd is my birthday.
>> CORRECT.
So I like the May^^
>> So I like May.
There are many celebrating day in May.
>> There are many celebrations in May.
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