Children\'s rights
학생이 쓴 원문
The basic rights of every child are the right to eat, sleep, be clothed and be safe. Parents, teachers, and citizens should help children play happily in a safe environment, eat without going hungry, and keep things clean so they can grow up healthy.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
The basic rights of every child are the right to eat, sleep, be clothed and be safe.
>>> The basic rights of every child are the right to eat, sleep, be clothed, and be safe.
Parents, teachers, and citizens should help children play happily in a safe environment, eat without going hungry, and keep things clean so they can grow up healthy.
>>> CORRECT!
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