Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons

2020-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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I fully agree that children should learn a foreign language ASAP. However, I don\'t agree about Korean curriculum especially English education. I am not sure if children have to be able to translate English to Korean. When we learn our own language, children just repeat what parents or people say. As same way, when we learn English I don\'t think children have to study grammar first and need to study the way how to translate English sentence. It is already proved that children can easily absorb whatever they hear or learn. As this reason, I think language training should begin before children study unnecessary subjects. In my experience, I have many friends who were living in the UAE. Many friends in the UAE have small children who are under 7 years old. I have seen that children who attended preschool could speak English fluently after about 2 years. However, we can see many children, I can say all children in Korea, still can\'t speak English and they have fear to meet a native speak

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I fully agree that children should learn a foreign language ASAP.
>>> CORRECT
 However, I don\'t agree about Korean curriculum especially English education.
>>>  However, I don\'t agree with the Korean curriculum especially English education.
 I am not sure if children have to be able to translate English to Korean. 
>>>  I am not sure if children would be able to translate English to Korean. 
When we learn our own language, children just repeat what parents or people say. 
>>> CORRECT
As same way, when we learn English I don\'t think children have to study grammar first and need to study the way how to translate English sentence. 
>>> In the same way, when we learn English I don\'t think children have to study grammar first and need to study how to translate English sentence. 
It is already proved that children can easily absorb whatever they hear or learn. 
>>> It is already proven that children can easily absorb whatever they hear or learn. 
With this reason, I think language training should begin before children study unnecessary subjects.
>>> CORRECT
 In my experience, I have many friends who were living in the UAE.
>>> CORRECT
 Many friends in the UAE have young children who are under 7 years old. 
>>> CORRECT
I have seen children who attended preschool could speak English fluently after about 2 years.
>>> CORRECT
 However, we can see many children, I can say all children in Korea, still can\'t speak English and they fear to meet native speakers.
>>> CORRECT

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