Children should do some chores at home.

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Because they can learn several things such as the value of hard working, cooperative attitude, creativity and leadership or can build a sense of work and responsibility, which will help them do the job of the future work well, from doing some chores at home.

>>>>Because they can learn several things  such as the value of hard work, cooperative attitude, creativity and leadership or it can build a sense of responsibility in doing some chores at home, which will help them do the job well on their future work.

However, it is a pity for many korean parents that they always tend to focus on their children\'s study and children are busy with their full schedule.

>>>>However, it is a pity for many Korean parents that they tend to focus on their children\'s study and they are busy with their schedule.

Many parents don\'t emphasize on children\'s doing some chores at home, overlooking more important points for that.

>>>>Many parents don\'t give importance to their children\'s chores at home, overlooking more important points for that.