Children under 13 should not be allowed to babysit.

2017-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

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There is no reason that children under 13 couldn't take care of someone younger. However it is unusual that parents let a child babysit younger children. Children in Korea are really busy after school due to parents are working together. They attend various institute until their parents get back to home. It is really shame that children are not having a time with parents. I am not sure if children over 13 years old can look after babies well. I guess that the most parents in Korea do not trust their child to babysit. If my son is able to babysit his younger sister well without any accident, I will let him take care of my daughter. I know that first of all I must trust my son to do well and give him enough time without punishment and yelling. Many kids now a days are much more mature than usual. If they want to babysit that they should take a class first and be sure that the adult is completely comfortable with the situation.

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Dear [이름],


A WONDERFUL Wednesday to you! ^.^


First of all, I would like to say I STRONGLY AGREE WITH YOU.

I also admire you for being open about this topic.

You are willing to give your trust to your son when it comes to his sister\'s safety.

I think babysitting is a good practice for elder kids in a family to understand their younger siblings.


That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you soon! ^^.


... Teacher Paula ... ^.~



There is no reason that children under 13 couldn\'t take care of someone younger.

>> There is no reason for children under 13  who can\'t take care of someone younger than them.

However it is unusual that parents let a child babysit younger children.

>> However, it is unusual for parents to let a child babysit younger children.

Children in Korea are really busy after school due to parents are working ogether.

>> Children in Korea are really busy after school due to their parents busy work.

>> OR: Children in Korea are really busy after school due to both of their parents are working.

They attend various institute until their parents get back to home.

>> They attend various institutes until their parents get back to their homes.

>> OR: They attend various institutes until their parents get back home.

It is really shame that children are not having a time with parents.

>> It is really a shame that children are not having time with their parents.

I am not sure if children over 13 years old can look after babies well.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I\'m not sure if children over 13 years old can look after babies well.

I guess that the most parents in Korea do not trust their child to babysit.

>> I guess most parents in Korea do not trust their children to babysit.

If my son is able to babysit his younger sister well without any accident, I will let him take care of my daughter.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: If my son is able to babysit his younger sister well without any accident, I will let him take care of her.

I know that first of all I must trust my son to do well and give him enough time without punishment and yelling.

>> I know that first of all, I must trust my son to do things well and give him enough time to do those  without punishment and yelling.

Many kids now a days are much more mature than usual.

>> Many kids nowadays are much more mature than before.

>> OR: Many kids nowadays are much maturer than before.

>> OR: Many kids nowadays are much more mature.

>> OR: Many kids nowadays are much maturer.

If they want to babysit that they should take a class first and be sure that the adult is completely comfortable with the situation.

>> If they want to babysit, they should take a class first and be sure that the adults are completely comfortable with the situation.

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