China and freedom.
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My wife\'s elder brother will go to china for working next month. he has to stay isolated at hotel because of pandemic. in fact, he want to go with his wife to there. but it is impossible, his wife also has to stay isolated in hotel. several years ago, he went to Singapore for working. that time, he invited our family and we visited there and had a enjoy time. because there was no pandemic. Do you know China? I think, there is no freedom in China. They control the people who have a nationality of China and the people can not speak and write about their country.
I think, we have to get a patriotism for my country. but if it is without freedom to expression , I can not live there no more.
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Hi [이름]!
Sorry this composition was late. I did many things. Anyways, let\'s talk in a few minutes. See you ^^
T. DON
>> My wife\'s elder brother will go to china to work next month.
He
has to stay isolated at hotel because of pandemic.
>> He has to isolate himself in a hotel because of the protocol.
In fact, he want to
go with his wife to there. but it is impossible, his wife also has to
stay isolated in hotel.
>> In fact, his wife wants to go there with him but it is impossible because she also needs to be quarantined.
several years ago, he went to Singapore for
working. that time, he invited our family and we visited there and had a
enjoy time. because there was no pandemic.
>> Several years ago, he went to Singapore to work. At that time, he invited my family and we visited Singapore and we had fun because there was no pandemic.
Do you know China? I think,
there is no freedom in China. They control the people who have a
nationality of China and the people can not speak and write about their
country.
>> Do you know China? I think,
there is no freedom of expression for the Chinese people. They control the people and they cannot speak and write things about their
country.
I think, we have to get a patriotism for my country. but if it is
without freedom to expression , I can not live there no more.
>> I think, we have to get a patriotism for my country. If we don\'t have freedom of expression, I can not live there anymore.
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